This is the first draft of my opening sequence:
This is isn't the final thing so i need some feedback from different people to make sure that we have the same opinion of what changes i should make. Therefore i asked my class to watch the first draft of my opening sequence to tell me what should be done to it to make it better.
This is isn't the final thing so i need some feedback from different people to make sure that we have the same opinion of what changes i should make. Therefore i asked my class to watch the first draft of my opening sequence to tell me what should be done to it to make it better.
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