After all the feedback i got i sat down the night after and did all the corrections and i've improved to a different level of the opening sequence. So this is my second draft, it isn't perfect and not exactly how i want it to be, so this time i will look at it several times and decide what i have to do to improve this and then ask my teacher what if what i considered to be removed or aded will be fine and good enough to make it a final opening sequence.
Weaknesses:
Weaknesses:
- Sounds and soundtracks are nor placed on the scenes where it will be better with it.
- Some shots are just unclear of what is happening
- No title
Strengths:
- The acting
- The quality of the camera
- Most shots clearly show what is happening and where
- On some of the scenes good soundtrack and effects
- Good match-on-action
- Lots of good shots
- Good places used for filming
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